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:It was the footnote reference that created that stoopid half-line break between the two lines. I've now fixed it in various ways. I had already noticed this, but thanks for pointing it out again. Be glad, very glad, that we don't have angels throwin' stuff at '''us'''! The protagonist comes to a bad end in the very last line.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 22:54, 12 December 2009 (UTC) | :It was the footnote reference that created that stoopid half-line break between the two lines. I've now fixed it in various ways. I had already noticed this, but thanks for pointing it out again. Be glad, very glad, that we don't have angels throwin' stuff at '''us'''! The protagonist comes to a bad end in the very last line.... [[User:Hayford Peirce|Hayford Peirce]] 22:54, 12 December 2009 (UTC) | ||
Ah, that's better! [[User:Ro Thorpe|Ro Thorpe]] 00:30, 13 December 2009 (UTC) | Ah, that's better! (Not the protagonist's end...) [[User:Ro Thorpe|Ro Thorpe]] 00:30, 13 December 2009 (UTC) | ||
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'In italics in the book' - is that the whole poem, or, possibly, just the last line? Ro Thorpe 21:54, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
- It was the footnote reference that created that stoopid half-line break between the two lines. I've now fixed it in various ways. I had already noticed this, but thanks for pointing it out again. Be glad, very glad, that we don't have angels throwin' stuff at us! The protagonist comes to a bad end in the very last line.... Hayford Peirce 22:54, 12 December 2009 (UTC)
Ah, that's better! (Not the protagonist's end...) Ro Thorpe 00:30, 13 December 2009 (UTC)