CZ Talk:Request Approved Article Copyedit/Archive 1

Link the article below on which you have made a copy edit to the draft of an approved article. A sysop will look over the change and make a judgment about whether or not to make the correction.

Copyedit corrections to approved articles can be made outside the approval process provided the change does not change the meaning of the sentence. If the sysop rules that a copyedit constitutes a content edit, the article will need to be re-approved.

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• Civil society
  • Done D. Matt Innis 02:46, 8 February 2010 (UTC)

• Literature (WP "approved error")
  • Unless I'm missing something, I fixed that one in December I think D. Matt Innis 01:14, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

On the WP list it is listed as open. Sorry, I did not check the page. Peter Schmitt 01:27, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Frederick Twort (WP "approved error")
  • Needs more consideration. "...discovered that bacteriophages are viruses that attack and destroy bacteria." Twort likely discovered that certain viruses destroyed bacteria. It is not obvious to me whether he coined the term "bacteriophage" or whether this came later. I don't feel comfortable giving him this credit without more information. An editor would be great as this does have an element of content reform. D. Matt Innis 01:09, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

I think you got this wrong. Neither sentence claims that he coined the word. It is only not the best English: "he discovered in b. the" means that he indentified b. to be v. and as the cause of . But Daniel would fit as an editor. Peter Schmitt 01:27, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

Certainly appreciate your thoughts. I've responded on the talk page. Chris, maybe you can help as well. D. Matt Innis 04:01, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Terrorism Error located on main article, not on Draft page: illegaly -> illegally
  • Done D. Matt Innis 01:04, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Demographic transition
  • Done, Chris Day 03:05, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• John Franklin
  • Done. D. Matt Innis 04:27, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Contraception (medical methods) Error located on main article, not on Draft page: knowlege -> knowledge
• Orchid
• DNA
• Drugs banned from the Olympics
• Contraception (medical methods)
• International economics
  • Done group above Chris Day

• MediaWiki:Licenses Protien -> Protein
  • Done.D. Matt Innis 21:33, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
• Orchid
  • Done.D. Matt Innis 21:33, 12 February 2010 (UTC)

• Tux
• Dokdo
• Crystal Palace
  • Done above three. Chris Day

• MediaWiki API retured -> returned

• Chemical engineering
• Complex number
• Bacteriophage Suprising -> Surprising. Error located on main article not draft.