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In the first para, is it intended to differentiate molecules from crystals and metals? Probably it is to early in the article to do that clearly. [[User:DavidGoodman|DavidGoodman]] 23:11, 5 November 2006 (CST) | In the first para, is it intended to differentiate molecules from crystals and metals? Probably it is to early in the article to do that clearly. [[User:DavidGoodman|DavidGoodman]] 23:11, 5 November 2006 (CST) | ||
That's something that I did not change from the original WP article (the inclusion of the word metal). I like waht you are doing and I think you should go ahead and change it to read better. Your work helps so much! I've been doing more on Medicine, because of slow and absent saves on the pilot, I've been working on a word document and will get it in sometime over the next day. I had a concussion in a car accident and so am not as speedy as I would like to be. Regards, [[User:Nancy Sculerati MD|Nancy Sculerati MD]] 10:27, 6 November 2006 (CST) | |||
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I changed some words again to what I think is clearer: affinity is 18th century, oxygen is Capital O , not zero, and apparently the familiar html markup works. But I only got to the first paragraph, and i still think it sounds clunky. DavidGoodman 21:42, 2 November 2006 (CST)
yes, still needs lots more work, but it's getting better.Nancy Sculerati MD 23:12, 2 November 2006 (CST)
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In the first para, is it intended to differentiate molecules from crystals and metals? Probably it is to early in the article to do that clearly. DavidGoodman 23:11, 5 November 2006 (CST)
That's something that I did not change from the original WP article (the inclusion of the word metal). I like waht you are doing and I think you should go ahead and change it to read better. Your work helps so much! I've been doing more on Medicine, because of slow and absent saves on the pilot, I've been working on a word document and will get it in sometime over the next day. I had a concussion in a car accident and so am not as speedy as I would like to be. Regards, Nancy Sculerati MD 10:27, 6 November 2006 (CST)