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:: In cases where the reference is to a printed publication, the link simply can be omitted. But I think that at least at the moment of approval all links should be valid. (The volatility of links is a problem. Is there a solution? Does it make sense to wait, or should the template be removed? --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 18:45, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
:: In cases where the reference is to a printed publication, the link simply can be omitted. But I think that at least at the moment of approval all links should be valid. (The volatility of links is a problem. Is there a solution? Does it make sense to wait, or should the template be removed? --[[User:Peter Schmitt|Peter Schmitt]] 18:45, 21 June 2010 (UTC)


:::Sandy was fixing some links in [[cypherpunk]], so he may be still fixing this. What would you like us to do?  
:::Sandy was fixing some links in cypherpunk, so he may be still fixing this. What would you like us to do?  


:::There is an Internet archive for saving linked content; I'm not sure of the copyright aspects. Daniel, I believe, knows much more about it. I know of no general solution to the volatility problem. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 19:15, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
:::There is an Internet archive for saving linked content; I'm not sure of the copyright aspects. Daniel, I believe, knows much more about it. I know of no general solution to the volatility problem. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 19:15, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
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:At the present time, however, I believe that more functionality is lost by insisting on standard blockquotes only than by variation. Unquestionably, this should be addressed by the Editorial Council, and, probably, the Management Council for technical aspects. [[User:Howard C. Berkowitz|Howard C. Berkowitz]] 00:27, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
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Potential reorganization

I am thinking of a re-organisation here, along the lines:

  • Attacks on the system
    • Practical cryptanalysis
    • Traffic analysis
    • Side channel attacks
    • Bypassing authentication
    • Guessing secrets
      • Dictionary attacks on passwords
      • Random number weaknesses
      • Small keys
  • Attacks on the ciphers

Then the topics we currently have under "Mathematical cryptanalysis".

Things like man-in-the-middle would then turn up in two places, first under "Bypassing authentication" because if you can do that then you don't have to break the actual encryption, and second under "Attacks on the ciphers" for details of attacks on different authentication mechanisms since those details are much the same as other attacks on RSA, block ciphers or whatever. Sandy Harris 01:51, 17 October 2008 (UTC)

Should social engineering be under guessing, or its own category? For that matter, where does one put the people who write their keys on their desk calendar?
"Social engineering" and "shoulder surfing" would be categories, perhaps subheads under practical cryptanalysis. Sandy Harris 07:18, 17 October 2008 (UTC)
Side channel, I assume. covers TEMPEST/HIJACK/TEAPOT/NONSTOP, timing analysis on plaintext, acoustic cryptanalysis, Operation RAFTER (specific case of getting the received text off the intermediate frequency)
Could you define "attacks on the ciphers"?
I think this is going somewhere interesting, but not sure where it is yet.
If you would, see if we can agree on some of the more specific (e.g.,) authentication attacks in communications security. I am also open to a better name for that article. Howard C. Berkowitz 05:51, 17 October 2008 (UTC)
By "attacks on the ciphers" (chosen mainly to contrast with "attacks on the system") I meant what is now called "mathematical cryptanalysis" and might be called "cryptanalysis proper". The article introduction refers to it as "classic cryptanalyis". Not sure what the best title would be.
Somewhere up in the opening/overview part I'd want to say that, while this is a real threat, it may not be the main threat in many cases. Quote Anderson [1] about banking sytems "the threat model commonly used by cryptosystem designers was wrong: most frauds were not caused by cryptanalysis or other technical attacks, but by implementation errors and management failures." or Schneier's intro to Secrets and Lies where he says in some ways writing "Applied Cryptography" was a mistake; too much technology, not enough attention to other issues.
Side channel certainly covers Tempest and RAFTER (new to me). I'm not sure if differential fault analysis and timing attacks go there or under "attacks on the ciphers"; I lean toward the latter since they aim at finding the keys rather than just reading material. Sandy Harris 07:18, 17 October 2008 (UTC)

Orientation

Given that many readers won't have much background, I think we need a section that considers both early manual methods before they were pure guesswork (and maybe a little there), and then materials, some declassified, from the 1920s and 1930s.

Let me offer what is mostly outline, which would go before specific attacks. ...said Howard C. Berkowitz (talk) 12:04, 17 October 2008

Preparatory

While it is not necessary to be fluent in a language to cryptanalyze it, languages have different statistical properties and it helps to know the language. Of course, if there is a change of guessing probable words, knowledge of the language is more important, and knowledge of the area of application (e.g., smuggling liquor or describing radar) can reveal even more. In a real-world rather than puzzle cryptanalysis, knowledge of the circumstances in which the ciphertext was collected can be informative. William Friedman proposed four basic steps:[1]

  1. The determination of the language employed in the plain-text version.
  2. The determination of the general system of cryptography employed.
  3. The reconstruction of the specific key in the case of a cipher system, or the reconstruction, partial or complete, of the code book, in the case of a code system; or both, in the case of an enciphered code system
  4. The reconstruction or establishment of the plain text

These are usually done in the order in which they are given above and in which they usually are performed in the solution of cryptograms, although occasionally the second step may precede the first.

Basic methods

The very earliest cryptanalysis seems to have been inspired guessing about the plaintext, or perhaps attacks against a known and fairly weak manual systems. In 20th century, mathematical and statistical techniques.

The most basic is frequency analysis.[2]. When the frequency of letters, graphed by frequency against count, do not follow the curve characteristic to the language, [3] which becomes increasingly effective when keys become more complex, even in simply polyalphabetic substitution on a monographic cipher, such as the Vigenere method. Frequency analysis is almost useless against pure transposition systems, other than than confirming the system is simple transposition if the frequency of letter curve matches, and the counts of letters in cleartest match the letters in the natural language.

Monoalphabetic substitution

The most basic form, such as the Caesar cipher, uses a single key alphabet; the same cleartext letter was always represented by the same ciphertext letter. Against this, basic frequency analysis is possible. The monoalphabetic keys of increasing complexity involve:

  • Constant shift monoalphabetic solution, in which each plaintext letter is shifted a fixed number of letter positions to the right
  • Keyword-based mixed, where the unique letters of a keyword (e.g., CRYPTO) form the first letters of a key alphabet, with the rest following in alphabetical order: CRYPTOABDEFGHIJKLMQSUVW
  • Completely random: QPWOEIROTIYUSAGFHGKJLMZNXBCV
Increasing the complexity of monoalphabetics

Encryption, even of fairly simple ciphers, became more difficult when two things happened:

  • encrypted text did not follow the spacing of plaintext, so that the insight of knowing that a particular cipher symbol was at the beginning, in the middle, or of the word did not help.[4]
  • padding began being used, so that X's or perhaps meaningless digraphs were inserted, so the message was always an integral multiple of the number of cipher alphabets

Basic polyalphabetic substitutions

The simplest polyalphabetic substitution used multiple constant shift keys. For a period of 4, the number of different encryptions before the sequence of keys repeats, an example would be:

Key 1: BCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZA
Key 2: CDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZAB
Key 3: DEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZABC
Key 4: EFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZABCD

Even with a method that was a short-period polyalphabetic solution, cryptographers might use different techniques for putting letters into the encryption system, and removing them. Assume there are four alphabets, 1-4, all Caesar variants (+1, +2, +3, +4), not shown for simplicity in the drawing, and the rows of ciphertext fall under the appropriate alphabet.

Contrast the example below, of ATTACK AT TWO TODAY, with spaces suppresed. The initial encryption works by

Writing out the cleartext,

       Cleartext
       1 2 3 4
Row A  A T T A
Row B  C K A T
Row C  T W O T
Row D  O D A Y
       Result of polyalphabetic substitution (four Caesar based  used)
       1 2 3 4
Row A  B V W D
Row B  D M D X
Row C  U X R D
Row D  P F C B
Mixing in basic transposition

Even with a method that was fundamentally polyalphabetic solution, cryptographers might use different techniques for putting letters into the encryption system, and removing them. Assume there are four alphabets, 1-4, not shown for simplicity in the drawing, and the rows of ciphertext fall under the appropriate alphabet.

In the example below, taking off the letters in groups of four, from left to right, would give

      BVWD DMDX UXRD PFCB

Only a slight modification of sending all the odd rows first and then the even would give:

      BVWD UXRD DMDX PFCB

While this is a trivial example, simple frequency analysis is no longer enough to decrypt; even given the key alphabets, simple decryption yields nonsense. Still, a system simple enough to respond to hand analysis often was still a challenge, especially when the encryptor used mixed alphabets and changed them frequently

Nonperiodic key alphabets

Ciphers were not always "geometric" or strictly periodic. An aperiodic cipher might only have 4 cipheralphabets in the key, but, if the order of their use is 1-2-4-3 on the first cycle but 2-3-4-1 on the next, reconstructing the key becomes more difficult. Using a nonperiodic key alphabets, ATTACK AT TWO TODAY, becomes, with spaces suppressed:

       Result of polyalphabetic substitution
       4 3 1 2
Row A  E W U F
Row B  G O B V
Row C  W Z P V
Row D  S H B A
Adding the simple transposition

Using the row-by-row model, the ciphertext of the first would be:

EWUF GOBV WZPV SHBA

but, with even-first,

GOBV SHBA EWUF WZPV

Mathematical cryptanalysis

Mathematical cryptanalysis emerged roughly in the 1920s, principally from William Friedman and his colleagues. These still used fairly basic mathematical techniques. A significant increase in cryptanalytic power came when techniques such as group theory were applied against the Enigma machine and other early machine ciphers; these are discussed later.

Basic approaches

The first two tests mentioned both address the problem of determining the number of key alphabets used in a polyalphabetic cipher. Both were designed at a time when polyalphabetic substitution was primarily a manual process, so they work best when there are both a relatively small number of key alphabets. an algorithm in which the key alphabets are used in a straightforward repeating sequence (e.g., 12341234, not 42231431) and a relatively large amount of text encrypted in them.

All depend on the reality that there is a high redundancy in written human languages. In English, the trigraph "the" is most common, and the cryptanalyst can safely assume that the most frequent trigraph may well be those three plaintext letters, which have rotated under the same key alphabets in a suitably long volume of text.

The purpose of these methods is to calculate what is variously called the "keyword length", the "cryptoperiod", or the number of key alphabets.

Kasiski test

Best known from the work of Friedrich Kasiski in 1863, subsequent research shows it may have been independently invented by Charles Babbage in 1844, although not publicized. Formally, it is a known ciphertext attack, but supplemented by linguistic knowledge of the cleartext language.

The analyst searches through the text and finds all repetitions of at least 3. Assume that JWR repeats 15 letters after its first appearance, then 20 letters later, then 15, then 45. This does not immediately give insight.

The next step, however, is mathematical: the cryptanalyst factors the separations, and discovers the all have 5 as a prime factor. This suggests that 5 key alphabets are in use, and that THE has been encrypted by the same three in each cryptoperiod. As yet, all that can be said is that the three are consecutive: they could be, within the period, 123, 234, 345, 451, or 352. Now, there is a choice. Should the Kasiski test be repeated looking for a different repeated string, or should the analyst start reconstructing the three potential key alphabets?

Actually, it may be more appropriate to check the assumption that this is a polyalphabettic substitution with a period of 5. If this is being done manually, start at the first letter of the ciphertext, and write it all out, in columns of 5. If the assumption is correct, the frequency distribution in each column should correspond to the frequency distribution of letters in plaintext. The ciphertext, suspected to be the "E" at the end of the trigraph, should be the most frequent letter in the column.

Index of coincidence

Kappa test

New heading

I've moved in some stuff from block cipher. I think we need a general heading whose subsections are Practical cryptanalysis, side channel attacks, traffic analysis, and attacks via host security weaknesses (key loggers, etc.). Not sure what to call it, though. "Non-mathematical cryptanalysis"? Sandy Harris 04:11, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

What next?

I've done some re-organisation and added some text, but I'm now blocked. I'm not at all sure the structure I have so far is right and I am sure it is incomplete.

The material above under "Orientation: and "Mathematical cryptanalysis" is good, though it is also incomplete. Should it go into this article? Or History of cryptography? See also my comment at Talk:Cryptology#What_next.3F. Sandy Harris 15:13, 1 February 2010 (UTC)

What about things like "unicity distance", "work factor", ... There is a lot of quite solid theory that this article should either cover or link to. I do not know enough to write that well and am not sure how the structure of either this article or the whole group of related articles ought to work. But those & the stuff above definitely need to go in somewhere. Sandy Harris 16:12, 8 February 2010 (UTC)
Interesting; I know about unicity distance, but learned it in the study of error correction and only later found its cryptographic applications. In the cryptologic context, I have no idea what a "work factor" may be but would be happy to learn.
Unicity distance probably should be in its own article, as it's significant in areas such as Redundant Arrays of Inexpensive Disks and other topics such as error-correcting codes. I do have Shannon's book somewhere and it's discussed in some of my graduate texts in discrete mathematics, so I could probably take a practitioner's draft. It would need to be edited and extended by a mathematician. Actually, I should be reviewing this area myself for some hopefully paid work regarding fault tolerance in cloud computing.
Do you know if the index of coincidence has been put on a more solid foundation that William Friedman's intuition?
Warning: possible tangential thought: if I were going to pick an area for a tutorial, this would be done. At least in my society, there is a great attraction to cryptology, beginning in puberty--Freud wrote about it, as I recall. I do have a few books, hopefully not in storage, directed at the beginner, such as Gaines and Sinkov. Are there good "seekrit code" articles on the web, or would our developing one improve our hit count? Don't worry, I wouldn't discuss how a few easy technical measures could make life much more difficult for drug traffickers and terrorists, although it might be fun to recount some of Dorothy Friedman's testimony against the rum-runners. Howard C. Berkowitz 16:35, 8 February 2010 (UTC)
"work factor" is a measure of the effort required to break a cipher by various methods. e.g. For brute force against a block cipher with n-bit key, the average work factor is 2n-1. I think the term is from Shannon and he proves some things about it. Sandy Harris 17:29, 8 February 2010 (UTC)
I have his information theory book in hard copy; maybe your reference is in the mathematical theory of cryptology, which I have somewhere but it's probably easier to download than find. will be offline for at least a few hours; I am alternating being medical advocate and interpreter for a four-legged and a two-legged family member. Today, it's human hematology. --Howard C. Berkowitz 17:35, 8 February 2010 (UTC)

My feeling here is that, while both the article and Howard's stuff above have some good text, the overall outline (both this article & some of the structure it needs to link to) is a mess. I am not at all sure how to sort it out. Sandy Harris 02:28, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

References

  1. Friedman, William F. (1938), Military Cryptanalysis, vol. I: Monoalphabetic Substitution Systems, Signal Intelligence Section, Plans and Training Division, U.S. War Department., p. 7-11
  2. Friedman-I, p. 11-17
  3. Friedman-I, pp.18-26
  4. Gaines, Helen (1939), Cryptanalysis,pp. 69-72

Steganography and covert channels

Sandy, do you consider a covert channel a subset of steganography, or a separate topic? I read your definition of steganography to refer to hidden information that "looks like" the covering information. In contrast, a covert channel (e.g., varying inter-symbol time) is not "in" the information but "besides" the information.

Since the steganographic information is not necessarily itself encrypted, but masked, I'm wondering if extracting it is strictly cryptanalytic. It's definitely part of communications intelligence. There are some very blurred areas, such as frequency-hopping or spread spectrum clear information transfer that can be received only if the receiver is synchronized to the crypto-like transmission changing scheme. --Howard C. Berkowitz 04:18, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

I'd say the distinction is blurry and the stego & c.c. text (do we have cc text? where?) should link to each other. I agree with your distinction; stego alters the message, puts data in it, e.g. least significant bits, while c.c. transmits the original message unaltered, but modulated by another signal. e.g. your timing example. However, there are intermediate cases, like hiding a message in non-printing characters so the visible message is unchanged, as in c.c., but the data on the wire is changed, as in stego.
If extracting stego'd data is not cryptanalysis, is it steganalysis? Sandy Harris 07:51, 9 February 2010 (UTC)
I added text in the stego section. Sandy Harris 10:06, 9 February 2010 (UTC)
And is the practitioner of steganalysis a stegosaurus? :-) There is a term, which I can't remember at the moment, for specialists in finding secret inks; perhaps it should be revised. I can do something on CC.
Adding to the blur are the areas such as inadvertent covert channels, such as van Eck radiation (TEMPEST) and related areas such as HIJACK (code word) and NONSTOP (code word). One could consider passive bugs in which ambient audio modulates microwaves or lasers sort-of-covert-channels (e.g., TEAPOT). Many of these, as well as things such as Operation RAFTER, fall under radiofrequency MASINT). --Howard C. Berkowitz 14:56, 9 February 2010 (UTC)
Perhaps we should add a section, or just a sentence(?), under Cryptanalysis#Non-mathematical_methods with links to those? Or cover them in a covert channels article? When you get beyond crypto and net security into intelligence work, or even out of the digital realm and into analog, I have almost no expertise. Sandy Harris 15:32, 9 February 2010 (UTC)
There's also related text at Cryptanalysis#Side_channel_attacks. I'm not sure how all this needs to be organised. Sandy Harris 15:35, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

Toward Approval

Currently, this article is nominated for approval by User:Howard C. Berkowitz. There is a large single edit that is obviously content related that begins this article and one or two that could be considered such throughout so it needs two more editors on board for a three editor endorsement for approval before we'll be able to lock the version. D. Matt Innis 12:43, 13 June 2010 (UTC)

Today is June 19th, 2010 and we still do not have two more editors on board for this article. I'll wait until the end of the day to give it a chance to get up to aproval standards. D. Matt Innis 12:55, 19 June 2010 (UTC)
OK -- I don't know if Sandy has left for the summer, so let me ping some potential other Editors. Howard C. Berkowitz 17:34, 19 June 2010 (UTC)
Hayford has begun to lock the article, but I returned the status to 1 until you've got the editors on board. If they agree we can return it to 0. If they need changes, make them to the draft and I'll just bump up the version number once everyone is agreed. D. Matt Innis 18:20, 19 June 2010 (UTC)
I had the intention to help out with the approval, but I discovered some broken links in the references and asked Sandy to first fix them. --Peter Schmitt 22:20, 19 June 2010 (UTC)
How about giving yourselves a few more days to get things together. It appears that you might be close; maybe 2 or 3 more days will be all that you need. D. Matt Innis 23:42, 19 June 2010
Peter, did you email these broken links or are they on a page? Howard C. Berkowitz 15:34, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

(undent) Sandy, are you still around? If not, I can probably fix the links. We will need a third editor besides Peter. Howard C. Berkowitz 00:04, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

Peter's edits are merely copy edits so you do have the option of Peter using the single editor approval if he feels he can. D. Matt Innis 00:13, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Matt, if Peter would be the primary nominator, might I then be a secondary approver as an honor to Sandy? Joe has said he has no problem with this sort of two-author approval. Howard C. Berkowitz 00:42, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Sure, there can be as many supporters as want to add their endorsement. Only three can go into the template at this point, though. D. Matt Innis 03:03, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
We can stick as many as we want in the metadata (and four show on the metadata template at the minute), but only three will show up on the other templates. --Chris Key 08:45, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
I'm around, but only sticking my head in once in a while. Busy with other stuff. Sandy Harris 08:25, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Howard, I put a message on Sandy's talk page assuming that this is the safest and fastest way. (And, of course, it is to repeat the check ...) --Peter Schmitt 19:43, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
In cases where the reference is to a printed publication, the link simply can be omitted. But I think that at least at the moment of approval all links should be valid. (The volatility of links is a problem. Is there a solution? Does it make sense to wait, or should the template be removed? --Peter Schmitt 18:45, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
Sandy was fixing some links in cypherpunk, so he may be still fixing this. What would you like us to do?
There is an Internet archive for saving linked content; I'm not sure of the copyright aspects. Daniel, I believe, knows much more about it. I know of no general solution to the volatility problem. Howard C. Berkowitz 19:15, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
I started checking.
  • Reference 8 works for me.
  • Reference 14 gets a notice that the publication is not available online. It does point to a paper, which has a proof of the point being made. We variously could cite only the hard copy, find another proof, or delete the entire sentence.
  • In like manner, I think the text surrounding references 19 and 20 could simply be deleted without huge damage to the article -- they are essentially supplementary.
  • 21 is one of three references on the same sentence, so I don't see it as needed.
Howard C. Berkowitz 19:22, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

(undent)This article is not qualifying for approval at this time. I'll return again this evening, but I'm thinking you'll want to change the date in the template rather than have me remove the template. D. Matt Innis 22:37, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

Reference 8 points to the paper of reference 12, i.e., to a wrong target.
Reference 14: What use is a link to such a notice? Published 1999 and "not yet approved". The journal citation is enough.
References 19 and 20: Why should the text be deleted only because the link does not work? They cite printed works. Moreover the links lead to a redirect notice which seem to work, so the new address can replace the old one.
Reference 21: Printed reference (Just delete the link).
Sorry that I did not provide this details. I thought this would be clear.
Personally, I would move most of these sources to the Bibliography, but that may be a matter of taste.
The remark of vanishing (unstable) links was meant as a general remark only that does not only concern CZ. --Peter Schmitt 22:59, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
Matt, since, at the moment, there is no version I would like to nominate I cannot add my name and change the date. But if the links are fixed I can make it ready for approval. --Peter Schmitt 23:02, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
Ah, that makes sense. Let me remove the template for now and when they get fixed you can nominate it again. Since everyone has seen it, you don't need to go the three days unless you want to give someone else (i.e. Howard) time to make changes. D. Matt Innis 23:13, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

(unindent) Howard, Sandy: Are there problems with the links? It would be nice if we could finish this ... (I cannot help because changing the links would probably be considered as adding content.) --Peter Schmitt 23:48, 22 June 2010 (UTC)

Yes, fixing a link would be fine, but changing a link could be a content edit, especially if it did not support the statement. D. Matt Innis 23:52, 22 June 2010 (UTC)
As you formulate this, fixing these links might be accepted ... but I do not want to test it. I do not quite understand why the interest in approving this article has suddenly vanished. (Principially, I think that such and similar changes should not disqualify as single Editor, but we have to use current practice, of course.) --Peter Schmitt 00:31, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
I agree that links are a gray area. Common sense should prevail on whether the link is a reasonable substitution, but we also have to consider that placing that decision in the hands of a constable with little knowledge of the subject can potentially be a problem if an editor was not aware of the switch. Most editors choose their words and sources carefully. Of course, the converse is true as well. If we let an editor edit the article, where do we draw the line on "how much is too much?" I am open to reasonable alternatives, but am in no hurry to let editors edit articles to their liking without having at least one other editor to answer to. D. Matt Innis 00:54, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
I'm not at all uninterested in getting this Approved, but I'd prefer to defer to Sandy on fixing the links. As can be seen, Peter and I would fix them differently. As long as Sandy does something that makes sense, I'd rather let it be his decision. Howard C. Berkowitz 01:15, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, but as I said above "I'm around, but only sticking my head in once in a while. Busy with other stuff." Sandy Harris 07:33, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
In that case, perhaps Peter and I need to agree on how to fix the links.
There's one 1999 paper that doesn't look as if it's going to become online. It does seem to have a useful proof -- perhaps it could either move to the bibliography, or we could (I think my preference) leave it in the article as text-only. Matt, in neither case, is the material lost.
A convention of mine is that it's rarely useful to have multiple citations on the same sentence; I believe I'm not alone in this. In the very rare case where it is useful, an explanation of why each is relevant could go in text -- otherwise, pick the best one for the article and move the others to the Bibliography/External Links (I wish they'd merge). It sounds as if Peter and I might agree on moves to Bibliography. Howard C. Berkowitz 13:22, 23 June 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, Sandy. I did not want to hurry you. I read your notice, but wondered because I saw that you (and Howard) were around editing and fixing the links seems to be a minor task and to require (my estimate) only very little work and time.
Howard: While I would indeed put most (if not all) of the references into the Bibliography, I do not want to do this for the current version (that has no Bibliography). If so, it should be done consistently, and moving (some or all) items would need some adapting of the text. That there are multiple references in the same sentence has to do with their status as pointers to the literature, not being references for a certain statement. Thus I suggest that the style of the article remains untouched, and only broken links are substituted or removed from the references. --Peter Schmitt 14:42, 23 June 2010 (UTC)

I have now, I think, fixed all the links except that I found nothing wrong with 14. Sandy Harris 16:21, 27 July 2010 (UTC)

Yes, ref. 14 is now ok. Has it been "approved" in the meantime? Irrelevant. Unfortunately, now ref.2 reports an error, and ref.12 only links to Citeseer. These links seem to be a "moving target" --Peter Schmitt 17:58, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
I deleted ref 2, which I thought was unnecessary anyway (see CZ_Talk:Article_mechanics#Citation_relevance), and added a URL for 12. Sandy Harris 23:02, 29 July 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, Sandy -- after deleting ref.2 it is ref.11 instead of 12! --Peter Schmitt 00:23, 30 July 2010 (UTC)
Right. Fixed 11. Sandy Harris 01:54, 30 July 2010 (UTC)

(unindent) Since, as far as I can see, all problems are resolved I have resumed the approval process by nominating the current version. --Peter Schmitt 09:29, 30 July 2010 (UTC)

the blockquotes detract from the article's appearance

Larry has said blockquotes should not be italicized.

I have started using:

<blockquote> <p style="margin-left: 2.0%; margin-right: 6%; font-size: 1.0em; font-family: Gill Sans MT, Trebuchet MS;">quote<ref name=…/></p> </blockquote>

Gives this appearance:

Any knowledge that doesn't lead to new questions quickly dies out: it fails to maintain the temperature required for sustaining life.>

Probably could be improved.  —Anthony.Sebastian 04:22, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

I'd say embedding formatting info like <p style="..."> is highly undesirable. If editing a page, I would want to delete any such stuff I see.
If you & Larry want blockquotes displayed differently, then change the templates or whatever controls that display. Sandy Harris 08:24, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
I agree with Sandy. Boris Tsirelson 08:52, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
The template that needs altering is Template:Quotation, but it should be discussed on the forums before changing something that affects so many articles. --Chris Key 10:14, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Maybe for now it is better to make an alternative template for those who want it? Boris Tsirelson 10:48, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
I don't personally agree with that. Having some articles use one format and others use another would just leave us looking inconsistant and unprofessional. To me, it wouldn't be much different to having some articles use a different font or perhaps having an article with a different coloured background. Such things should be decided by the community as a whole, and consistant throughout all articles. --Chris Key 12:28, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Well, I continue using our blockquotes without worrying about appearance. Boris Tsirelson 16:02, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Consistency important, but too much consistency, that hobgloblin, stifles creativity, innovation, and author freedom. I hope no one believes CZ anywhere nearly free of inconsistency and that something should be done about it pronto. Please, Sandy, don't delete my blockquote format, until this issue gets settled. By settled, I mean getting a blockquote format the community agrees upon. Thanks. Anthony.Sebastian 23:13, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

(unindent) I agree with Chris that consistency is important, both for the look and feel of CZ and for practical reasons. I agree with Sandy and Boris that logical markup (templates) should be used (and visual markup be avoided) whenever possible. I agree with Sebastian that, nevertheless, there should be room for individual variation. Consistency is not the same as uniformity. Thus a sortiment of "consistent" templates (or a template with a choice between options) is needed. (For the creative part, testing possibilities, directly used code is no problem.)--Peter Schmitt 23:56, 20 June 2010 (UTC)

I am reluctant to complicate web pages in the interest of interoperability and standard representation, but, unfortunately, some of the existing formats, especially blockquote and lists, break down in the presence of images or tables of contents. Sometimes it's possible to work around this, by being sure a list is on the right of the graphic. In other cases, however, the indentation of the blockquote is completely lost and one might as well not use it. For that reason, I asked Anthony to do some unconventional formatting in the Joshua Lawrence Chamberlain article, which has many quotes and images. Not all are working, but we should get there.
At the present time, however, I believe that more functionality is lost by insisting on standard blockquotes only than by variation. Unquestionably, this should be addressed by the Editorial Council, and, probably, the Management Council for technical aspects. Howard C. Berkowitz 00:27, 21 June 2010 (UTC)

APPROVED Version 1.0

Congratulations, Sandy, Howard, and others, after long years of work! Hayford Peirce 23:05, 1 August 2010 (UTC)