Talk:Dokdo (Takeshima)/Archive 1

Naming

Take a look at CZ Talk:Naming Conventions#naming is separate from neutrality, only based on common use? - the article title name was decided with this discussion. (Chunbum Park 09:18, 9 May 2008 (CDT))

good job. Richard Jensen 14:18, 10 May 2008 (CDT)

thank you. (Chunbum Park 14:23, 10 May 2008 (CDT))

note on propaganda sounding sources

We'll use them only for statistics (i.e. coordinates, rainfall, Japanese names, Korean names). Contents that advocate for Japanese or Korean side should be used only to detail the arguments that each side is making. (Chunbum Park 14:13, 26 May 2008 (CDT))

i think your images are fine

I think your images are fine. I am not an expert but I would definitely but also upset if someone protested their validity. I don't see how they can be copy-righted if you drew them yourself. Tom Kelly 22:28, 28 May 2008 (CDT)

thank you ! : ) especially for maps, I think "referencing" is fine. I remember how map publishers research on previously published maps to make new editions but they're not copyrighted & at the same time they're "derivative work"s. (Chunbum Park 09:27, 29 May 2008 (CDT))

for ppl @ wikipedia

Kajimura, Hideki. "The Question of Takeshima/Tokdo," Korea Observer, Vol. 28, No. 3 (Autumn 1997), pp. 423-475

To presume that the existence of Takeshima ~ Tokdo was not known to those people who lived and engaged in farming on Ullungdo for several hundred years is caused by a prejudice regarding Koreans as half-witted.

...the Japanese government confirmed Takeshima/Ullungdo as Korean's inherent territory in 1696, and took the measure of prohibiting completely Japanese from making voyage there.

The word "voyage" (or crossing sea) means voyage to a foreign country (since a permit is not needed for going to a domestic island), and the fact that the Japanese/government issued a permit of voyage to Matsushima means that the Japanese government did not regard it as a Japanese territory...

During the heated anti-foreign campaign between 1952 and 1954 the notion that "Takeshima ~ Tokdo is Japan's inherent territory penetrated into the Japanese for the first time. This campaign was also utilized clearly as a means to push for Japan's military rearmament.

Van Dyke, Jon. "Who Owns Tok-Do/Takeshima? Should These Islets Affect the Maritime Boundary Between Japan and Korea?," Korea-America Joint Marine Policy Research Center, the University of Rhode Island, October 8, 2004.

Korea's claim to sovereignty over the islets is thus substantially stronger than that of Japan...

Fern, Sean. "Tokdo or Takeshima? The International Law of Territorial Acquisition in the Japan-Korea Island Dispute," Stanford Journal of East Asian Affairs, Vol. 5, No. 1. (Winter 2005) pp. 78-89.

This paper sets out to demonstrate why South Korea has a stronger claim to the Liancourt Rocks...

East Asia’s Troubled Waters – Part II - an article from the Yale Global Online, published on 2006-04-27.

Japan asserted its legal claim then, even though, based on the International Crisis Group’s review of historical records, Korea had a stronger claim.

I can understand that many people will doubt if my work here can be unbiased and accurate simply because I am a South Korean. However, I dare anyone to try to find a non-government, professional thesis or article that argues for the Japanese side. There is none. That is why I am so confident with what I write here. (Chunbum Park 08:46, 17 July 2008 (CDT))

Now, as for the article title (already decided here), there can be 2 frameworks that can be used - common use/commonality and international law. However, most English speakers do not know about the dispute at all, and "Liancourt Rocks" is not used exclusively in English - both "Takeshima" and "Dokdo" are usually included by the same literature as well. Then, if there is no established common use, we have to use the official name or the native name of the islands. Well we have 2 so we have to choose 1. How? International law. (Chunbum Park 22:00, 8 July 2008 (CDT))

Climate and Ecology

Looking at the line that reads, "The study also found in Dokdo, 8 of the species that are endangered in Korea, including the falcon, the Siberian honey buzzard, the owl, the black kite, the Japanese murrelet, and the swan." I find this a bit vague. The terms falcon, owl and swan are very general. Can we get more precise names for these birds. Derek Harkness 10:24, 18 July 2008 (CDT)

Hello, thank you for taking a look at the article. This is the cited link that provides that list.

In the U.S., I'm sure there are at least several species of owls or falcons (i.e. black bear, brown bear), so people want specific scientific names in the endangered list.

In South Korea, I don't think there's much variety because people ate them all (maybe not). But I will try to find what you are asking for. (Chunbum Park 10:53, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

The falcon seems to be peregrine falcon. here ("northern Asia") & wikipedia korea's entry "매" links to "peregrine falcon" & not "falcon" in general. (Chunbum Park 11:10, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

Found it. Peregrine falcon. I added it. (Chunbum Park 11:29, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

Sorry but I can't find out which owl's endangered. There are about 4 types of owls that live in South Korea. I guess owls don't taste all that good. (Chunbum Park 12:28, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

approval discussion/comments

I made a few minor adjustments to wording which should probably be included in the approved version. The only notable change was that I pointed the link that used to be to an unwritten article titled "Arguments of the territorial dispute over Dokdo" to the debate guide subpage. I think that is a good use of the debate guide.

I wonder if the conclusion section shouldn't be rewritten somewhat before approval. It seems rather speculative and argumentative as it now stands. --Joe Quick 11:01, 18 July 2008 (CDT)

"guide" is perfectly fine. I had hard time writing the conclusion because I don't really know how to conclude it, actually. The speculative tone was emulated off of Sean Fern's article (read the last part). If you think all the speculation is a bit risky or unencyclopedic, you can edit it in any way you want or direct me to a proper model. (Chunbum Park 11:12, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

By the way, is the article neutral enough? Any confidence? (Chunbum Park 11:13, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

Yes, except for the conclusion, it seems very balanced. I'll have a look at the Fern article and see what I can do with the conclusion. --Joe Quick 11:42, 18 July 2008 (CDT)

Oh, I thought that the speculative and predictive tone of the conclusion was problematic. Do you mean that the conclusion a bit anti-Japanese or a bit provocative? Such tone was adopted by Hideki Kajimura in this article. (Chunbum Park 11:58, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

Ah ha, do you mean "despite South Korea's stronger historical claim and its actual control of the islets"? Sean Fern's article presents it that way. If you see the "for ppl @ wikipedia" section above, I've listed several journal articles or studies that say "South Korea has stronger claim.." I promise that, even if there are many articles that try to stay neutral on subject, you will not find any that supports the Japanese claim. (Chunbum Park 12:18, 18 July 2008 (CDT))

Thank you very much for copy editing & checking for grammar mistakes! (Chunbum Park 12:22, 18 July 2008 (CDT))