Talk:1944 assassination attempt against Hitler

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 Definition:  An assassination and coup attempt principally by senior anti-Nazi German Army officers, in which Hitler was injured and the coup failed [d] [e]
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The quality of writing in this article is so bad that I'd like to SD it, never mind PD. However, it is an important historical topic so we need to improve it by making it readable and ensuring its authenticity. For example, the "Abortive Attempts" piece makes no sense at all and the "multiple plots" opener needs to be qualified.

The whole thing should be scrapped and rewritten from scratch. John (talk) 02:08, 9 March 2024 (CST)

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