It Won't Get You Anywhere: Revision history

20 April 2024

• curprev 07:3107:31, 20 April 2024‎ Pat Palmer talk contribs‎ m 13,847 bytes +23‎ Text replacement - "London" to "London"

20 September 2009

• curprev 18:5518:55, 20 September 2009‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 13,824 bytes +13‎ →‎Plot: typo

14 July 2009

• curprev 12:3012:30, 14 July 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,824 bytes 0‎ Undo revision 100530448 by Christian Liem (Talk) revert -- major, major deletions without explanation? A mistake?
• curprev 11:4911:49, 14 July 2009‎ imported>Christian Liem‎ 2,853 bytes −10,971‎ No edit summary

12 July 2009

• curprev 17:4017:40, 12 July 2009‎ imported>Derek Hodges‎ 13,824 bytes +8‎ disambiguation
• curprev 17:1617:16, 12 July 2009‎ imported>Ro Thorpe‎ m 13,816 bytes +5‎ →‎The New York Times appraisal: typo
• curprev 13:3513:35, 12 July 2009‎ imported>Christian Liem‎ 13,815 bytes +4‎ No edit summary

31 May 2009

• curprev 07:5307:53, 31 May 2009‎ imported>Caesar Schinas‎ m 13,811 bytes +13,811‎ Robot: Changing template: TOC-right

18 May 2009

• curprev 22:5022:50, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,811 bytes +1‎ →‎Provis: added a "
• curprev 22:4722:47, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,810 bytes +24‎ →‎Plot: minor rewriting
• curprev 22:4422:44, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,779 bytes −2‎ →‎Plot: rewrote a link
• curprev 22:4122:41, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,781 bytes −5‎ →‎Plot: side, not side side
• curprev 22:3922:39, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,786 bytes +13,589‎ →‎Plot: copyediting
• curprev 22:3722:37, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,783 bytes +6,466‎ →‎A tin ear: everything schmoolie here
• curprev 19:0319:03, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,479 bytes +92‎ →‎A tin ear: all ready to add another Scheider blockquote
• curprev 18:5918:59, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,387 bytes +198‎ →‎A tin ear: added some more Merkin dialog
• curprev 18:4618:46, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,246 bytes +57‎ →‎Observations: did a little more rewriting, but incorporated your opening edits -- thanks!
• curprev 18:2418:24, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Howard C. Berkowitz‎ 13,189 bytes +5‎ Haven't read the book -- does this make sense?
• curprev 18:1118:11, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,198 bytes +14‎ →‎Observations: added a couple of words
• curprev 18:0518:05, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 13,184 bytes +546‎ →‎Observations: treatment of gays typical of the time, perhaps....
• curprev 17:5517:55, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 12,638 bytes +92‎ →‎Plot: changed schoolboy to schoolmaster
• curprev 17:5317:53, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 12,637 bytes +91‎ changed footnote
• curprev 17:5117:51, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 12,546 bytes +3,744‎ correcting formatting
• curprev 17:4917:49, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 12,546 bytes +1,127‎ the NYT
• curprev 16:1916:19, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 11,419 bytes +2,591‎ →‎Observations: better save this stuff
• curprev 16:1216:12, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 10,966 bytes +2,138‎ →‎Provis: more about Provis, with blockquotes and footnotes
• curprev 15:0615:06, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,828 bytes +26‎ →‎Plot: changed a second "penetrated" to "infiltrates"
• curprev 15:0515:05, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,827 bytes +25‎ →‎Plot: added another footnote
• curprev 15:0415:04, 18 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 8,802 bytes +1,485‎ →‎Plot: added some more stuff and a couple of footnotes

17 May 2009

• curprev 23:5223:52, 17 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,425 bytes +108‎ →‎Provis: added a footnote about Shirley Bassey
• curprev 23:3923:39, 17 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,317 bytes +7,120‎ added some stuff about Provis, will try to finish this article tomorrow or the next day, so that I can start on Brock #2 book
• curprev 23:3523:35, 17 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 7,197 bytes +1,326‎ save, before adding more

10 May 2009

• curprev 12:2912:29, 10 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,871 bytes −10‎ →‎Plot: copyediting
• curprev 12:2712:27, 10 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,881 bytes +3,858‎ →‎Plot: added a little, including the name of the bad guy
• curprev 12:2512:25, 10 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,770 bytes +115‎ what the simple plot actually is

1 May 2009

• curprev 23:4123:41, 1 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,687 bytes +32‎ →‎Plot: added a couple of words
• curprev 23:3823:38, 1 May 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,655 bytes +155‎ →‎Plot: some rewriting and a little more

30 April 2009

• curprev 23:1623:16, 30 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 5,500 bytes +3,477‎ Americanisms
• curprev 22:3722:37, 30 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,707 bytes +780‎ →‎Plot: added some more, although I hadn't meant to
• curprev 22:2722:27, 30 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,432 bytes +45‎ →‎Plot: a little rewriting

29 April 2009

• curprev 22:5422:54, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,387 bytes +460‎ →‎Plot: more about Brock plus other stuff
• curprev 22:5022:50, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,275 bytes +253‎ →‎Plot: where the HQ are
• curprev 22:4422:44, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,022 bytes +3‎ minor change
• curprev 22:4322:43, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,013 bytes −6‎ cut another word
• curprev 22:4222:42, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,019 bytes +92‎ cut a couple of words
• curprev 22:4022:40, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 4,023 bytes +25‎ added a little info to the Skirrow bit
• curprev 22:3722:37, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,998 bytes +71‎ set up headers so that I can generate an index
• curprev 22:3322:33, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,927 bytes +88‎ added an "however"
• curprev 22:3222:32, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,917 bytes +78‎ added a word
• curprev 22:3122:31, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,903 bytes +64‎ moved a word around
• curprev 22:3122:31, 29 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,903 bytes +64‎ minor rewriting in lede and expansion

28 April 2009

• curprev 23:0123:01, 28 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,839 bytes +1,816‎ Provis
• curprev 22:5922:59, 28 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,795 bytes +1,772‎ setting up intro for the next para
• curprev 22:5822:58, 28 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,754 bytes +764‎ more about it wont get you anywhere
• curprev 22:5622:56, 28 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,684 bytes +320‎ put back in a phrase that had disappeared
• curprev 22:5322:53, 28 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,645 bytes +252‎ some more info, some rewriting

27 April 2009

• curprev 22:5122:51, 27 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,393 bytes +29‎ a little bit about Skirrow
• curprev 22:4922:49, 27 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 3,364 bytes +374‎ added a paragraph before I forget
• curprev 22:4322:43, 27 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,990 bytes +1‎ changed climatic to climactic, a significant difference
• curprev 22:4122:41, 27 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,989 bytes +966‎ added a paragraph that will eventually be incorporated towards the end of the finished article, plus other stuff
• curprev 22:3022:30, 27 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,245 bytes +124‎ more info
• curprev 22:2422:24, 27 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,121 bytes +98‎ Added a sentence about Desmond

26 April 2009

• curprev 23:0623:06, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 2,023 bytes +1,295‎ and he will put himself upon the thone
• curprev 23:0323:03, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 1,977 bytes +168‎ rewritting, more info
• curprev 22:5922:59, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 1,904 bytes +94‎ changed a word, added some stuff
• curprev 22:5422:54, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ m 1,810 bytes +1‎ grammar
• curprev 22:3722:37, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 1,809 bytes +466‎ rewriting
• curprev 22:3222:32, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 1,763 bytes +1,115‎ Yes, I see the Save Bug that other people have been talking about -- I just lost most of the text. Found it in an earlier History easily enough, however
• curprev 22:2922:29, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 648 bytes −790‎ beginning to outline the plot
• curprev 22:1922:19, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 1,438 bytes +74‎ more rewriting
• curprev 22:1622:16, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 1,364 bytes +21‎ added a couple of words -- Brock is a *tough* adman
• curprev 22:1522:15, 26 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 1,343 bytes +615‎ added to lede para, begun secord para

24 April 2009

• curprev 23:2423:24, 24 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 728 bytes +531‎ adding a little more text and a footnote

23 April 2009

• curprev 22:4322:43, 23 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 197 bytes +197‎ rewrote lede a little, to add more info -- tomorrow I'll start writing the article

22 April 2009

• curprev 17:5617:56, 22 April 2009‎ imported>Hayford Peirce‎ 122 bytes +122‎ began article