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[[User:Lowri Phillips|Lowri Phillips]] 21:00, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
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[[User:Amelia Sheldon|Amelia Sheldon]] 17:08, 8 October 2009 (UTC)
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[[User:Katherine Laura Greenall|Katherine Laura Greenall]] 15:08, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
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Nicholas, I thought you wanted to work on diabetes? If so you should join the [[Diabesity]] article, if you have changed your mind let me know. [[User:Celine Caquineau|Celine Caquineau]] 10:48, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
Nicholas, I thought you wanted to work on diabetes? If so you should join the [[Diabesity]] article, if you have changed your mind let me know. [[User:Celine Caquineau|Celine Caquineau]] 10:48, 13 October 2009 (UTC)


[[User:Katherine Laura Greenall|Katherine Laura Greenall]] 15:08, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
 


Any news form Hannah? [[User:Celine Caquineau|Celine Caquineau]] 09:57, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
Any news form Hannah? [[User:Celine Caquineau|Celine Caquineau]] 09:57, 14 October 2009 (UTC)

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Lowri Phillips 21:00, 5 October 2009 (UTC) Amelia Sheldon 17:08, 8 October 2009 (UTC) Katherine Laura Greenall 15:08, 13 October 2009 (UTC) Rachael White 13:51, 12 October 2009 (UTC)

Very good start, you've got a nice selection of reviews here.Gareth Leng 09:38, 13 October 2009 (UTC)


I agree! Just a minor point: Check the format of your references, Journal titles should be in italic and not within " " for instance.

Nicholas, I thought you wanted to work on diabetes? If so you should join the Diabesity article, if you have changed your mind let me know. Celine Caquineau 10:48, 13 October 2009 (UTC)


Any news form Hannah? Celine Caquineau 09:57, 14 October 2009 (UTC)