Talk:Thylakoid/Draft: Difference between revisions

From Citizendium
Jump to navigation Jump to search
imported>Anton Sweeney
imported>Gareth Leng
No edit summary
Line 2: Line 2:
==Start article on [[Thylakoids]]==
==Start article on [[Thylakoids]]==
Begin as stub. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 22:50, 4 January 2010 (UTC)
Begin as stub. [[User:Anthony.Sebastian|Anthony.Sebastian]] 22:50, 4 January 2010 (UTC)
==Short and sweet==
Your prose has a poetic quality Anthony. The first sentence though is too long, I think it would help to split it. But the article says enough and says it nicely. Am happy to nominate for approval when you're ready.[[User:Gareth Leng|Gareth Leng]] 17:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC)

Revision as of 12:50, 11 November 2010

This article has a Citable Version.
Main Article
Discussion
Related Articles  [?]
Bibliography  [?]
External Links  [?]
Citable Version  [?]
Gallery [?]
 
To learn how to update the categories for this article, see here. To update categories, edit the metadata template.
 Definition A system of membranes inside chloroplasts, housing the proteins that carry out the light-dependent reactions of photosynthesis. [d] [e]
Checklist and Archives
 Workgroup category Biology [Editors asked to check categories]
 Subgroup category:  Botany
 Talk Archive none  English language variant American English

Start article on Thylakoids

Begin as stub. Anthony.Sebastian 22:50, 4 January 2010 (UTC)

Short and sweet

Your prose has a poetic quality Anthony. The first sentence though is too long, I think it would help to split it. But the article says enough and says it nicely. Am happy to nominate for approval when you're ready.Gareth Leng 17:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC)