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==Nepali Media and Madhesi Movement article==
==Nepali Media and Madhesi Movement article==
Can you look at [[Nepali Media and Madhesi Movement]] if you have time - do you think it should be wikified, moved to [[CZ:Cold_Storage|Cold Storage]] or deleted? [[User:John Stephenson|John Stephenson]] 04:21, 13 October 2007 (CDT)
Can you look at [[Nepali Media and Madhesi Movement]] if you have time - do you think it should be wikified, moved to [[CZ:Cold_Storage|Cold Storage]] or deleted? [[User:John Stephenson|John Stephenson]] 04:21, 13 October 2007 (CDT)
Looked at it briefly.  I am no expert on Nepal, however, I think that this sort of thing is very valuable and helps distinguish this effort by going beyond the obvious.  Some immediate thoughts on content: It seems like it could use a little editing, mostly to clarify what the Madhesi movement is....  Also, it might be slightly more neutral in town, avoiding phrases like "agitator" unless placed in quotes.  If you want me to do any edits, I can take a crack at it.
Hope this is helpful.  [[User:David Shapinsky|David Shapinsky]]

Revision as of 09:16, 17 October 2007

Hi,

I saw that you took charge of the Industrial Revolution (the article, I mean). Is this in an editorial or writing capacity? Are the plan to rewrite it imminent or something you'd dabble with in the future? I'd like to know so I can see if it is better to invest or divest... Ori Redler 21:21, 23 November 2006 (CST)

Nepali Media and Madhesi Movement article

Can you look at Nepali Media and Madhesi Movement if you have time - do you think it should be wikified, moved to Cold Storage or deleted? John Stephenson 04:21, 13 October 2007 (CDT)

Looked at it briefly. I am no expert on Nepal, however, I think that this sort of thing is very valuable and helps distinguish this effort by going beyond the obvious. Some immediate thoughts on content: It seems like it could use a little editing, mostly to clarify what the Madhesi movement is.... Also, it might be slightly more neutral in town, avoiding phrases like "agitator" unless placed in quotes. If you want me to do any edits, I can take a crack at it.

Hope this is helpful. David Shapinsky